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Forget Me

November 18th, 2017, 2:38 pm
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hiram4mayor November 18th, 2017, 6:33 pm
Thank you so much for your review! You made some very good points and I agree with pretty much all of them. I think the main reason that a "plot" is lacking is probably my inexperience with pacing a story, if that makes sense? There is a bigger picture besides the romance (which is more a secondary plot point) but I guess I'm having trouble conveying it so far? Especially so early in the story. So I definitely will keep that in consideration! Also I think I kind of understand what you're getting at with the characters so I will try to keep that in mind. Aaand I must admit that the reason I haven't posted any of the extra material here is because I do admittedly have a preference for tapastic and don't REALLY understand the format of this site but that's all on me, obviously. I'll probably consider including some of that stuff on here. Overall, thank you for you for your very detailed review, I appreciate it very much!