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The Power of Bonds

October 21st, 2017, 1:37 pm
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Ultizeta October 21st, 2017, 1:37 pm
Read the comic adaptation of The Power of Bonds here, and read the original fanfiction here!

Also, important news! I am officially OPEN for new review requests for the first time since I started! Submit your comics after you've read through the rules that can be seen on the first page!
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witswithme October 23rd, 2017, 11:03 am
I see. I apologize for the late reply; I meant to respond when you posted, but, well, I had to attend a funeral.

Well, as for the two "conflicting goals" (I never really thought of it as such until you stated that, to be honest.), you more or less had it right. I do want it to be a faithful adaptation of the fanfic, but if I find a part that I can make funny or serious without changing the script all that much (ie. "OH THE IRONY", the Classic Amy "roast"), I'll implement the moment. To be frank, I started making those changes after your first review of the comic two years back (notified by the different font that I now use). I agree that the earlier author notes are rather awkwardly added (the ones in Chapter 1 will be removed), though I...struggle to comply with the one in Chapter 2 (Humorously enough, it just so happens to be the panel you chose to represent for The Problems.), namely because of what was written in the original fic. As for the ellipses...I'll have to get back to you on that.

Speaking of the original work, I realize that the fanfic is...flawed, for lack of a better word. As you mentioned, a number of the character interactions felt kinda forced, like the latter events of Chapter 2. This was something I kinda had to change a bit for the adaptation, as you probably noticed.

Regarding D.stortion's absence, I haven't been in as much communication with stortion as much as I really should. However, with my upload schedule as it is, I hopefully will be able to finish the comic after the fanfic is completed. Hopefully. All I can really do is continue the adaptation one comic at a time.

Thank you for taking the time out of your day to review this little comic adaptation of mine. It was really an eye-opener. I hope the rest of your day turns out well.
SuperAnonymousGuy (Guest) November 19th, 2017, 12:33 pm
I do not remember that happening at the end of Exception Zone.